(Taken the Metro 18 March 2010) (My apologies for the folded corner.)
The text reads:
FLIGHT LIEUTENANT
ANNE GEISON
RAF AIR TRAFFIC CONTROLLER
KINLOSS, SCOTLAND(image: plane in clouds)
12TH SEPTEMBER 2006
A RUSSIAN PILOT CAUGHT IN A(image: black and white plane with lightning)
STORM - LOST AND LOW ON FUEL.
AND ME - 2 WEEKS
OUT OF TRAINING.
THE STORM KNOCKED OUT(image: black and white radio tower with lightning)
HIS INTRUMENTS AND
HALF OF MY RADAR...
HE WAS HEADED FOR SOME RADIO(image: black and white man in plane looking stressed)
MASTS - I HAD TO ACT QUICKLY.
I GOT HIM BACK ON COURSE,
KEPT HIM CALM, GUIDED HIM DOWN.
A FEW WEEKS LATER I RECEIVED(image: photo of RAF woman in front of No. 10 Downing Street)
AN AWARD AT DOWNING ST.
MUM WAS
REALLY CHUFFED.
BE PART OF THE STORY
Comparison of the two ads: (apologies for sloppy formatting)
Role of main character: | Nurse | Air Traffic Controller |
Person(s) helped: | "men" | "Russian pilot" (male) |
Problem: | "What do you do for men who've seen what they've seen?" | storm knocked out radar |
Actions taken: | care, gave coke & kind word | got him back on course, calmed, guided |
End Result: | proud of soldiers "brothers" | award in Downing St, mum is happy |
Words in bold: | ambushed, injured, care, they'd, kind word, coke, brothers, proud | lost, low on fuel, training, half of my radar, quickly |
Overall, this ad shows a gender-neutral look at women in the RAF. The role is less stereotypical - how many air traffic controllers in the RAF are women? The actions and skills displayed are also more knowledge and skill based rather than a soft genereic skill such as giving coke. The ad doesn't make the flight lieutenant in question completely emotionless, though, as the note that "mum was really chuffed" shows that she still cares about her family and what they think. It softens the entire ad without over-sentimentalising it.
Congratulations, RAF, for not falling into the stereotypes that caught you last time. The huge size of this ad and its placement in the general news section of the Metro should attract women who are thinkers and doers rather than passive television viewers. The only change I'd make is from a blue colour scheme to a warmer one, as that blue is generally associated with masculinity and warmer colours with feminity. (Except for purple. Maybe that's an idea?)
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